Top notch（lol）。I really liked the story， it was nice to see how the villagers outsmarted the evilness of Crazy Craig。It was also cool that the story came from Jake's Grandfather as well。 Question @Dr。 Block: Was Jake's grandpa alive during the time when Grassy Gulch got their freedom？Plot: 31/33 -Really good。Quality: 32/33 -SameCreativity: 30/33 -Awesome！Overall: 93/100 =5/5Keep up the great work :）btw loved the self advertising in chapter one :Pit made me laugh Top notch（lol）。I really liked the story， it was nice to see how the villagers outsmarted the evilness of Crazy Craig。It was also cool that the story came from Jake's Grandfather as well。 Question @Dr。 Block: Was Jake's grandpa alive during the time when Grassy Gulch got their freedom？Plot: 31/33 -Really good。Quality: 32/33 -SameCreativity: 30/33 -Awesome！Overall: 93/100 =5/5Keep up the great work :）btw loved the self advertising in chapter one :Pit made me laugh 。。。more